Comment Wall- College and Karma

Thank you in advance for your feedback.


(Portrayed is the idea that Karma is continuous repercussions of our actions: Source: Wikimedia)

Comments

  1. Hi Lindsey!
    I love the idea of karma that you are doing. I kinda did something like this last spring for my storybook, but your idea of karma is present in the life. Mine was spread among generations and more longer lasting! I also love the story you used to describe this. This story reminds me a little of Chicken Little. I don't know if you noticed but your formatting for your website is kinda off. All of your text is all pushed to the right with this gigantic space on the left. You could put a picture there or just elong your space. Your writing is also very condensed, so it might be a nice way to break it up with pictures or indentations. This would be definitely something my friends would do to me! I think it would be funny if at the end, if Joe actually ran out of good karma.
    Can't wait to read more karma stories!

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  2. Hi Lindsey!
    Overall, I really liked your project idea! I love the fact that you are basing it on karma, and that you are putting it in a college setting that most readers in this setting are comfortable with! At the point in the semester that I am reading (week 6), there is only one story up so far, so I cannot wait to read more. I really liked the story you shared, I think it is a great story and you did a good job rewriting the original story that you are basing it off of. I wish that your home/ introduction page included more research and information on karma. I think that it would make readers understand much easier and it would help you get the right view on the idea of karma itself to help you write your stories! I will link a couple of sources that you could potentially use for this purpose.
    Overall, you have done a great job so far and I cannot wait to see how this project advances! :)

    Karma research:
    https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Karma
    https://www.livescience.com/41462-what-is-karma.html

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