Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Looking through comments left for me along with the comments I left for other peers, I am pleased with both. I enjoy being able to read through other people's work and give feedback as it helps me realize what things I could be working on. I find it very helpful to suggest things they can add or ways to enhance their work. By doing this, it makes me think about my own work and think about ways I can enhance my own work. As for the comments left on my work, I really like having the opportunity to improve. So far I feel like all the comments left have been very positive and helped me grow as a creative writer. My favorite things to post on are the Intros because I feel like I am learning a lot my peers. I like to read all the comments left on the post and that helps me learn about all my peers even when I am just reading a certain person's intro. Looking forward, I want to make sure I thoroughly read through comments left on my intro and even reply to what I feel is necessary. I chose the picture below because I love the idea of constructive feedback and being able to give and receive it. I feel like constructive feedback is the most useful way to learn from your own work and other people's work.

(Constructive Feedback Info; Source: How to Craft Constructive Feedback)

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Introduction to a future PA

Hi everyone, my name is Lindsey. I am a junior here at the University of Oklahoma. I am originally from the Dallas, TX area much like a big portion of the students here at OU. My major is Health and Exercise Science, pre-PA. I have always been interested in sports and sport related injuries so I plan to become a PA for an orthopedic surgeon. The coolest thing about being a Health and Exercise Science major, or any major that is on a medical track, is that you have to take anatomy here at the university. The really unique thing about OU's anatomy course is that it is with cadaver. While that may freak most people out, the opportunities OU students have with having a cadaver experience really help for later admission into medical and graduate programs. Out of all my classes I have taken so far, that class would have to be the most challenging but also the coolest experience. As I said earlier, I am a big sports girl and root for all the Dallas teams, the Dallas Stars and...

Comment Wall- College and Karma

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Week 11 Story: The Case of the Missing Slipper

Once upon a time, lived a princess and her prince, on their vast piece of land. With them in their palace, lived hundreds of guards, servants, and courtiers to cater to their every needs. Next to their palace was a preparatory school. Many students would come to the palace to tour and hopefully prepare them for a life like the princess and the princes'. The princess and prince loved having an open landscape so they could get to know the students. On one sunny day, the prince and princess went for a lovely stroll along the pond that resided near the palace. As they were used to students often being around the palace, the princess told her courtiers to make sure her valuables were kept safe. The princess had her favorite pair of slippers that were her most important possession. They were a pair of beautiful pearl white slippers with a single pearl at the tip of the shoe. (The princess's favorite pair of while slippers; Source: pxhere ) Monet was a student at the prep scho...

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