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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Looking through comments left for me along with the comments I left for other peers, I am pleased with both. I enjoy being able to read through other people's work and give feedback as it helps me realize what things I could be working on. I find it very helpful to suggest things they can add or ways to enhance their work. By doing this, it makes me think about my own work and think about ways I can enhance my own work. As for the comments left on my work, I really like having the opportunity to improve. So far I feel like all the comments left have been very positive and helped me grow as a creative writer. My favorite things to post on are the Intros because I feel like I am learning a lot my peers. I like to read all the comments left on the post and that helps me learn about all my peers even when I am just reading a certain person's intro. Looking forward, I want to make sure I thoroughly read through comments left on my intro and even reply to what I feel is necessary. I chose the picture below because I love the idea of constructive feedback and being able to give and receive it. I feel like constructive feedback is the most useful way to learn from your own work and other people's work.
(Constructive Feedback Info; Source: How to Craft Constructive Feedback)

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