Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Looking through comments left for me along with the comments I left for other peers, I am pleased with both. I enjoy being able to read through other people's work and give feedback as it helps me realize what things I could be working on. I find it very helpful to suggest things they can add or ways to enhance their work. By doing this, it makes me think about my own work and think about ways I can enhance my own work. As for the comments left on my work, I really like having the opportunity to improve. So far I feel like all the comments left have been very positive and helped me grow as a creative writer. My favorite things to post on are the Intros because I feel like I am learning a lot my peers. I like to read all the comments left on the post and that helps me learn about all my peers even when I am just reading a certain person's intro. Looking forward, I want to make sure I thoroughly read through comments left on my intro and even reply to what I feel is necessary. I chose the picture below because I love the idea of constructive feedback and being able to give and receive it. I feel like constructive feedback is the most useful way to learn from your own work and other people's work.

(Constructive Feedback Info; Source: How to Craft Constructive Feedback)

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Introduction to a future PA

Hi everyone, my name is Lindsey. I am a junior here at the University of Oklahoma. I am originally from the Dallas, TX area much like a big portion of the students here at OU. My major is Health and Exercise Science, pre-PA. I have always been interested in sports and sport related injuries so I plan to become a PA for an orthopedic surgeon. The coolest thing about being a Health and Exercise Science major, or any major that is on a medical track, is that you have to take anatomy here at the university. The really unique thing about OU's anatomy course is that it is with cadaver. While that may freak most people out, the opportunities OU students have with having a cadaver experience really help for later admission into medical and graduate programs. Out of all my classes I have taken so far, that class would have to be the most challenging but also the coolest experience. As I said earlier, I am a big sports girl and root for all the Dallas teams, the Dallas Stars and...

Comment Wall- College and Karma

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Week 13 Story: Simba The Silent

In the lands of Africa, there was a big rock in which was ruled by lions. There once was a small lion cub... well at least he looked like a lion cub. We'll call him Simba and he was the son of the king lion. Simba had always been different from the other cubs. His parents knew he was different and Simba knew he was different, but they kept his specialness to themselves. If the other animals found out then Simba could not be the heir to the throne, but Simba was a social butterfly and was always around the other cubs. He was always playing with the other lion cubs and causing a ruckus. One day they were playing hide and seek. Simba was the last cub hiding and the other cubs had no idea where he was. Simba had the element of surprise on his side and he wanted to frighten the others. So he inhaled a big, huge breath and opened his mouth, preparing to let out the loudest and scariest roar any of the cubs had ever heard. Except that loud, scary roar is not what came out. Instead, the n...

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